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高考英语作文评分标准 阅卷评分五个档次的高分模板

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全国卷高考英语作文被划分为五个档次。阅卷标准如下:

全国卷高考英语作文评分标准

1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。

2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

3.词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。

6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。

第五档(很好):(21-25分)

完全完成了试题规定的任务

(1)覆盖所有内容要点

(2)应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,

(3)语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力,

(4)有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的

第四档(好):(16-20分)

完全完成了试题规定的任务

(1)虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容

(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

(3)语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致

(4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑达到了预期的写作目的

第三档(适当):(11-15分)

基本完成了试题规定的任务

(1)虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容

(2)应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求

(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解

(4)应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的

第二档(较差):(6-10分)

未恰当完成试题规定的任务

(1)漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容

(2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

(3)有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解

(4)较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性信息未能清楚地传达给读者

第一档(差):(1-5分)

未完成试题规定的任务

(1)明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求

(2)语法结构单调、词汇项目有限

(3)较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解

(4)缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯信息未能传达给读者。

根据上面的评分标准,有以下几点需要注意

1英语作文第一印象很重要,阅卷老师在短暂的判卷过程中,需要迅速判断文章的档次。整洁的卷面将会为考生争取更多的“印象分”。所以考生在注重英语作文语句通顺、语法正确的条件下,仍需注意字迹清晰这一要求。

2如果最后几天,字迹实在改变不了,可以在考场上多提醒自己,字迹不求写得多好看,但是一定要容易辨认,同时建议字写得不要太小或太拥挤,否则不利于电脑阅卷。

3字数问题。切记字数不要过多或过少,字数刚好为宜,字数太多或太少都会成为扣分的因素。

超级实用的英语作文模板

段首句

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to____.Some people suggest that____.

2.俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying____.It’s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3.现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today,____, which havebrought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____.Second,____.What makes things worse is that____.

4.现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。

Nowadays,it is common to____.Many people like ____because____.Besides,____.

5.任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and____is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… 

People’s opinions about____vary from person to person.Some people say that____.To them,____.

7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem____which is becoming more and more serious.

8.……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。

____has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

____has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢? According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that____ while.Obviously,____,but why?

中间段落句

1.相反,有一些人赞成……,他们相信……,而且,他们认为……。 

On the contrary,there are some people in favor of ____ .At the same time,they say____ .

2.但是,我认为这不是解决……的好方法,比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ____ .For example,____.Worst of all,___.

3.……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的,(也是)非常重要的。首先,……。而且……,最重要的是……

____is necessary and important to ourcountry’s development and construction.First,____.What’s more, ____.Most important of all,____.

4.有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先,我们可以……。 There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can____.

5.面临……,我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……,另一方面,…… 

Confronted with____,we should take a series of effective measures to____.For one thing,____For another,____.

6.早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……,另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。 

It is high time that something was done about it.For example,____.In addition.____.All these measures will certainly____.

7.为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说,……的主要原因是由于…… 

Why____? The firstreason is that____.The second reason is____.The third is____.For allthis, the main cause of ____due to ____.

8.然而,正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样,……也有它的不利的一面,象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides,____also has its own disadvantages, such as____.

9.尽管如此,我相信……更有利。

None the less, I believe that____is more advantageous.

10.完全同意……这种观点(陈述),主要理由如下: 

I fully agree with the statement that____because____. 

结尾句

1.至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为…… 

As far as I am concerned, I agree with thelatter opinion to some extent.I think that____.

2.总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样,我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ____.Only in this way can ____in the future.

3.但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如,……,而……。然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)…… 

But ____and ____have their own advantages.For example, _____, while_____.Comparing this with that, however, I Pfer to______.

4.就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that____.Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.

5.随着社会的发展,……。因此,迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ____.So it’s urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

6.至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。只有这样,我们才能…… 

For my part, I think itreasonable to_____.Only in this way can you _____.

7.对我来说,我认为有必要……。原因如下:第一,……;第二,……;最后……但同样重要的是…… 

In my opinion, I think it necessary to____.The reasons are as follows.First ____.Second ____.Last but not least,____.

8.在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而,就我个人而言,我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether ____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______.However, from a personal point of view find ______.

9.综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论…… From what has been discussed above, we mayreasonably arrive at the conclusion that____.

10.如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.

书信的常见写作模板

开头部分:

1.Let me tell you something about the activity.

2.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re comingto China for a visit.

3.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

4.And I would like to write a letter to tell you that…

结尾部分:

1.Bestwishes.

2.I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

3.I’d apPciate it if you could reply earlier.

口头通知常见写作模板

开场白部分:

Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement tomake.

正文部分:

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.

结束语部分:

Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.

议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...(导入话题) Our opinions are pided on this topic.(观点有分歧)

正文部分:

第2段Most of the students are in favor of it.(正方观点) Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3个同意的理由)

第3段However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点) Their reasons are as follows.In the firstplace...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论部分:

第4段Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)

2.“A或者B”类议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much better.Personally, I would Pfer A because I think Ahas more advantages.

正文部分:

第2段There are many reasons why I Pfer A.Themain reason is that ...Another reason is that...(同意A的原因)

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2个B的优势)

结论部分:

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)

3.观点论述类议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.(亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)The reasons for this may be listed as follows.(过渡句段承上启下)

正文部分:

第2段Firstof all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3个同意或反对的理由)

结论 第3段In conclusion, I believe that...(照应第1段,构成"总?分?总"结构)

4."How to"类议论文模板:

导入部分:

第1段提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文部分:

第2段 Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is ...Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论部分:

第3段These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

图画类写作模板

开头部分:

Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...

衔接句部分:

As well as l know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something inmy daily life.

结尾句部分:

In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../Ashas been stated..